Wednesday, August 6, 2014

Loss Of Innocence Comments

Rating: 5.0

Give me your hand child
This world is filled with too much weeping
More than you can understand
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Cheryl Griffith
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Roseann Shawiak 03 September 2014

Understanding of the reality of our world is beyond a child's comprehension. Their innocence is to be protected and preserved by parents and other adults it is true. The simplistic truth and innocence in your poem is truly astounding. Your imagery and rhythm are superb. All in all a great poem. I love it! ! RoseAnn

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Cheryl Griffith

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San Fernando Trinidad and Tobago
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