Saturday, November 7, 2009

Loss Of Innocence Comments

Rating: 5.0

A single picture has brought it all back again.
I can smell the smells
and hear the sounds
as though it were yesterday
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George Grogan
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Allan O 09 November 2009

wow you speak of what i write but this...this is awful...not in the way you place it into your words but of the content in general..it is hard to rate hurt and punishment as such...for your write i offer a 10 of course..for content i offer a tear...for it is beyond words to comprehend such anguish my friend.... ~^..^

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Fay Slimm 07 November 2009

The title could not be enlarged into more disturbing content than in this piece Michael - - a personal testament to the truth held in the final line, and very honestly written.

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Edward G 07 November 2009

That was intense. God bless you and heal you of all pains.

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