Tessa Marshall

Tessa Marshall

Etobicoke (How am I supposed to know the hospital?)
Monday, July 27, 2009

Loss Of Friendship Comments

Rating: 5.0

The beauty of friendship is fleeting
You used to be my family
Now you are far away
And I am nothing
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Brigid Guthrie 25 August 2009

You were like a sister to me You were the rainbow after the rain But now you are the dark clouds That roll in before it storms I know exactly how you feel and I've gone through losing friends before.. It's not easy and very sublime. You do a great job at expressing your feelings and thoughts in this poem, and i can see the emotion you felt when writing. Also how you were feeling about your friend. Great job, well written.10 (:

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Tessa Marshall

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Etobicoke (How am I supposed to know the hospital?)
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