Sunday, July 17, 2011

Loss Of Consciousness Comments

Rating: 5.0

My thought makes a goddess on itself on the mirror.
It plays vision on what myself want to be.
It says: Hi! This is you. Think positively, then you'll be alright.
But still, I confused with what is coming out.
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chandra yusuf
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 17 July 2011

Nice poem composed with vivid imagery. I liked the theme very much. Kudos to your skill. Keep it up. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... I shall be highly obliged if you please read and rate my poem 'A world of treason' on page 4. Warmest regards Akmal

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