Thursday, November 7, 2013

Loss Of A Soldier Comments

Rating: 5.0

From misconception to depression
Hate and all that is lost
War is not the answer
We must end them at any cost
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Tom Billsborough 14 May 2016

I like this poem and I've just read the Race poem for which Pam gave you some very sound advice. You write very well but you don't seem to have submitted anything for a long time. I'm a bit confused as I see your name quite often, especially when I'm reading Wes Vogler's oogie series. Am I mixing you up up with someone else? Perhaps you could let me know. Anyway this poem deserves a ten. Tom Billsborough

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Mike Smith 17 May 2016

Hello Tom. Thank you for the kind words. I have started a blog and that is where I write and post my poems now. I love the advice that Pam and others have given me and I try to incorporate it in my writings. BTW I think there are probably a few Mike Smith's so it is more than likely someone else

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