Wednesday, August 22, 2012

Loss Of... Comments

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Loss it seems is the worst kind of sorrow
Loss of dreams, the dreams of tomorrow
Loss of the moments you two should have shared
Loss of opportunities to show her you cared
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Michael Ernst
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Here loss of is coming in every sentence But, the poet uses superb rhyme in the end So, the poet's imagination has not dried He could have avoided this loss of I must sanction my appreciation anyhow i only suggest to give it extra beauty I truly enjoyed reading the poem. mvvenkataraman

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Virginia Wolf 31 January 2014

The poem is really amazing!

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Shane O Brien 23 October 2013

i really liked this, mostly the last two lines

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Michael Ernst

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