Loss (Haiku) Comments
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Hi Nosheen, It is as if the tree has shed its leaves to join you shouting Ma Nishaada!
AS Akham says below, THE AGONY OF THE BIRD! Your brief poem casts a long shadow about the injustice of life, when good and loving creatures are threatened with harm, themselves doing no harm. This is effortlessly profound. Your haiku, Nosheen, are superior! I really enjoyed the three I've read.
Thanku so much Daniel. This is the first time i tried my hand at haiku. I find it difficult to write by rules n a certain metre or scheme. But it was a good experience to give it a shot.
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8/3/2025 12:09:52 PM # 1.0.0
Unbearable pain, indeed....10+