On his leafless perch
The lonely bird laments loud
His mate is hunted.
Hi Nosheen, It is as if the tree has shed its leaves to join you shouting Ma Nishaada!
AS Akham says below, THE AGONY OF THE BIRD! Your brief poem casts a long shadow about the injustice of life, when good and loving creatures are threatened with harm, themselves doing no harm. This is effortlessly profound. Your haiku, Nosheen, are superior! I really enjoyed the three I've read.
Thanku so much Daniel. This is the first time i tried my hand at haiku. I find it difficult to write by rules n a certain metre or scheme. But it was a good experience to give it a shot.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Unbearable pain, indeed....10+