Friday, May 26, 2006

Loss Comments

Rating: 5.0

Unattainable perfection
Highlighted flaws projected through a reflection
Glanced at through lowered eyes made heavy
With unanswered cries
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Amanda Grimes
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Desirae E. 29 June 2006

great poem on a difficult subject. good job

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Sophia White 26 May 2006

A brave write, Amanda, and an inspiring one. God bless.

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Brian Dorn 26 May 2006

Amanda, excellent write on a difficult subject matter, ... a wonderful redemption at the end. Well done! !

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Uriah Hamilton 26 May 2006

Make sure you don't reject yourself! ! Everyday, you're a virgin and innocent if you want to be! ! Everything belongs to you! !

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Amanda Grimes

Amanda Grimes

Cleveland, Ohio
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