Monday, March 30, 2009

Loss Comments

Rating: 5.0

In the depths of the night,
As they stumble–in darkness,
They know not what is right;
Who has been here the longest?
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The Grandmother is Watching
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Liyo Denorte 27 April 2010

interesting.. and u write so well =) keep on brewing,

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You tell a story a story you tell you tell a story and you tell it well never could anyone ever beleive that it wasn't you who made up the reprieve. A great poem my friend. Live Well

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 31 March 2009

Wondeful write.......................so beautiful and mesmerizing................I give you10++++............

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Dustin Harold 30 March 2009

oh my dear friend... this is most delicious. The way you progress the point is most intriguing. The choppy style of this poem is unmatched! Live Well

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