Saturday, January 24, 2009

Loss Comments

Rating: 5.0

The sky is falling!
The sky is falling!
Lightning strikes a dead cord in my heart.
Electrifying my senses
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Krystal Vincent 04 July 2009

i loved this poem. it was very unique and well writen.I can tell it came from the heart and thats all that matters when it comes to writing. i loved it so thinks for sharing this lol

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Hunter Dasten 04 February 2009

Very good my friend! You have captured the crazed thoughts that come from hopelessness when you've suffered a loss quite well.

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