Friday, April 10, 2009

Losing Your Way Comments

Rating: 5.0

The swirls of darkness
pull me under for a while.
When I find the surface
I have to correct all the wrongs
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Kristen Brewster
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Bradley Lester 28 May 2009

Nice poem, short and sweet yet powerful. Good one

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Ronny Self 14 April 2009

I'm glad you DIDN'T stop writing poetry like you said you were going to! Excellent poem. You have a way with words that creates meaning deeper than you may know. I appreciate your work. Keep it up!

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