Losing Your Virginity (A Silly Poem) Comments

I like being a vigin but some boyfriend want to break mine..Add a comment.

Good explicit silly poem. Hahahahaha

ha-ha, and practice makes perfect...

I'm glad you enjoyed it, Ruth. I hope that people laugh when they read this poem, as it is quite silly. Nonetheless, I stand by the message: people shouldn't get upset if their first time is a bit of a disappointment.

I hate to be the one to be so honest, but this is awful. It is sophomoric, and trite.

THIS POEM IS STRAIGHT TO THE POINT IT SHOWS THE TRUE MEANING BEHIND THE KIND OF SEX BEING EXPLOITED IN THE MEDIA TODAY. THIS POEM SHOWS OTHER YOUTHS THAT SEX ISNT WHAT PEOPLE THINK IT IS, IT'S SO MUCH MORE.

Bravo. I like the message, and the humour that lies within the poem. I think diversity is so important in a poem. I'ts what makes comedy writers different. I enjoyed that. Best Steve