Losing Your Beloved Woman To Another Man. Comments

Nice writing, thanks to share it.. +++10

When I first read this poem I almost cried because it's like this poet wrote my love life. You shall enter the gate of life while I shall enter the gate of death. Not only will a man cry losing his beloved woman but we women do cry as well. Thanks for sharing your poem.I give you 10

You are a true believer in love's possibilities. Viewed from one aspect, love is fleeting; it is a child of the moment. But to the true believer it is forever conserved, like matter that cannot be created or destroyed, but can only change form. When two people are together, it flashes up at one point. When two people separate, the love has to go somewhere. Your poem tells us where it goes.

While I shall be living a life of suffering and fear. You will enter the gate of life, While I shall enter the gate of death......... i shall live dreaming of the world of love where heavenly spirits fall in love. a very nice poem......... love and despair.. it is a terrible emotional event if it is true....... but there are so many in this world who seek for your love and care......... she is not the only woman in this world. take courage. pray and move on........ tony