Losing You Comments

He who betrayed is not a man, but a beast, which goes by its instrinct and has no sixth sense to think and act.

Wow, this was quite profound. I didn't expect the ending. Imagery and content were great in this piece, as it seems to deplict how you feel through honest emotions that only one in love can experience. Then pain is sometimes hard to bear, but somehow we manage to get through it. Well done. Well written.

I understand how you can lose someone you never had...and sadly many friends in the process...I liked this poem....and if this is your first on the site...keep them coming...Vallerie