I stopped by some fields of pretty wild flowers, today.
To ponder for just a moment. I hadn't planned to stay.
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These pretty flowers I find they remind me, so much
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This poem is wonderfully touching. It grabbed my attention from the title to the last line. Love can be cruel sometimes but the heart can take a lot and come up fighting. Thank you so very much for sharing your talent :)
lovely out burst of emotions. giving away yourself for the true love is a great play. but we are not always lucky and doesn't get what we want all the time in return. take care and keep on composing nice poems.
Perhaps then; that's only when, i'll be over you... ........................................................................ Thad, It is graceful line... Very beautiful verse- minor... 10..... Best wishes, Tsira
I swore I wouldn't add any more about finding love, or losing love poems to my favorites list but yours was so packed with little delicate movements and quirkiness and just a delight.
Good to see you online, Friend Thad...Splendid work this be, Mr. Wilk, from the opening couplet to it's train of accompanying tricets....Like the wrap-around style...Prosaic, free-verse & poetry, all in one...The Literary Trinity, could this be? FjR
'Like a thief in the night. Your only plan, was to steal My heart'... what a line! expressive to the core...good poem Thad...you excel there with your anticlimax in romance...10