Losing You! Comments

Leaves may fall as it run dry, Like my gloomy eyes when i sigh. There is a sad tone. it is touching the reader. a lovely poem indeed. liked it very much. tony

How the life adapts to progression phases, has been underlined very beautifully in this poem. The photo is an icing on the cake. Thanks. A quote: Oh please...hammer me! i am malleable... Do it warily... I am fragile, you cant take back deformities.

An absolutely lovely poem, Janice. Thank you