Thursday, January 14, 2010

Losing Them Comments

Rating: 4.1

Grip of hands loosen,
Lost sight of what was there,
Bonds broken,
Eyes closed shut,
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Amber Muth
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Jayne Davies 10 February 2014

Lovely! Well done to you!

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Lyn Paul 10 February 2014

Expressed beautifully Amber. It is never easy fair welling a loved one yet we all know that these times sadly effect us all. Thank you

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Leslie Philibert 10 February 2013

a poem that needs, I think, a frame or structure, emotions alone don`t work

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Sagar Shelar 10 February 2012

Really heart's close poem.

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Gajanan Mishra 10 February 2012

very good poem. thanks

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