Monday, November 19, 2018

Losing The Names - Triplets Comments

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Rain floods river
River joins sea
Rain and river lose own names
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Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair
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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 May 2024

Poor boy steals bread and earns a name 'thief'......spotlight is put on one of the burning social issues!

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Edward Kofi Louis 06 January 2019

Dawn! ! Love in the hut. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Thank you Edward very much

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Devi Krishnakumar 22 December 2018

A good triplet especially the last two.

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Thank you Devi.good commrnts

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Thank you Devi

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Valsa George 25 November 2018

Beautiful triplets! The last one is outstanding!

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Thank you Valsa George. Your words of encouragement fills my heart.

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Prabha Nair 20 November 2018

I enjoyed the first half of the poem where you have described how names are lost dramatically.

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Thank you Prabha. We are identified in so many ways. Sometimes our identity is lost to a new one

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