Wednesday, April 1, 2009

...Losing The Battle Comments

Rating: 3.0

The battle is over
It took so long
But lasted a mere hour
I gave my best
...
Read full text

Amy
COMMENTS
Kesav Easwaran 28 May 2009

you lose your battle in a noble way there, Amy...a write vivaciously expressive...thanks...10

0 0 Reply
Ashraful Musaddeq 08 May 2009

Amazing, love it.10+

0 0 Reply
Mel Vincent Basconcillo 15 April 2009

ur poem is a great example of emotion..marvelous write Amy

0 0 Reply
Kenn Sun 10 April 2009

Is it mentioning the Love, as battle?

0 0 Reply
Dr Hitesh Sheth 09 April 2009

Life is not fair.........and one must get used to it..........Bill Gates (Microsoft Chairman) ..............Your effort is really commendable..........to lost is not imortant neither to win..........importance is to fight.......you fought that's good............Good Write.........I like it............

0 0 Reply
Amy

Amy

Close
Error Success