The battle is over
It took so long
But lasted a mere hour
I gave my best
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ur poem is a great example of emotion..marvelous write Amy
Life is not fair.........and one must get used to it..........Bill Gates (Microsoft Chairman) ..............Your effort is really commendable..........to lost is not imortant neither to win..........importance is to fight.......you fought that's good............Good Write.........I like it............
you lose your battle in a noble way there, Amy...a write vivaciously expressive...thanks...10