Losing Sanity Comments

Know this wealth as dream, On it, why crown & gleam? Just like the wall of sand Empires of the world stand CP

A well penned..great piece.Thanks for sharing your talent with us

am just afraid of labeling you You are like me, rather better than me It is just the matter of misfortune For you or for me You are gaining insight And I am losing one In the dissociation of reality Reality is a reletive concept and it changes as the context changes. One gaining insight while the other loosing it seems no sharing of reality happening there. I gave up labelling and diagnosing long time ago as it is an insane act to fix people with lables who may be beyond our so called sane comprehension and who do not fit into our standardised form of reality. I don't know if you are trying to say what i have understood! But as always I wouls say; mutiple perceptions and multiple realities! 8/9/09

The look of eyes sometime is sharper than sword. The same eyes many times show a sign of love. Eyes can express many things as an index of the mind. The poem is well composed

The question of ' What should I do' coming at the end of the verse is in just the right space after making a summary of what attraction is doing to the mind - - the usage of strong descriptive comparisons too is all adding to the power of this fine romantic poem....10 from Fay.

On the illusory canvas of my skeptic brain You never looked that lucid to me............................oh what an expression by the imagery of Psychedelic smoke/Rising in the backstreet of my shallow mind, really wonder awes that happens to happen yet ingenious write,10+++, thanks for sharing

sanity is a myth but good write maybe you are losing it lol 10

where is sanity to lose it, doc? loved some expressions like 'backstreet of my shallow mind/illusory canvas of my skeptic brain' enjoyed reading...