Saturday, April 17, 2010

Losing Myself Comments

Rating: 5.0

This skin I carry
Is strange unfamiliar and scary
Petrifying, that every move is stiff,
Absolutely terrifying
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naomi deluca
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Michael Brock 18 April 2010

Very well written and very intense. Poetry is like this poem, ours but not really ours. I enjoyed the flow and the imagery you used. thanks a lot for sharing Michael

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Intense, deep and eloquent verses well penned. Thanks for sharing.

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