Thursday, December 28, 2006

Losing Myself Comments

Rating: 4.3

Cuddling with my beloved
under the warmth of satin sheets,
I gently sense the merging of souls
as our bodies become one flesh.
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Joseph James Breunig 3rd
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Cynthia Buhain-baello 22 October 2013

Beautifully romantic and captivating view of love as God created it to be.

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Nimal Dunuhinga 03 November 2009

A good write Joseph! There is no myself when entwined with love?

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Aijaz Asif 24 November 2008

a marvellous write sir with the memories of someone loved...bravo i liked it thanks 10

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Pia Andersson 07 October 2007

Beautiful and very sensual writing from you. Thank you. Very well written

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John Tiong Chunghoo 03 January 2007

dear joseph, first thanks for spending time with my poetry. this piece of poetry shows me that you are daring and keen to explore. great spirit. never give up.sincerely john.

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joey oo 30 December 2006

There is nothing better than 'losing' oneself under the sheets...just don't get lost :) Take care and have a great New Year. Joey xx

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Patricia Gale 28 December 2006

A divine piece of romance!

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 28 December 2006

Ahhh, Viva Romance.Fine crafting, here, Joseph.Nice crisp, tight-knit versing...F.J.R.

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Joseph James Breunig 3rd

Joseph James Breunig 3rd

Bangor, Maine (USA)
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