Losing My Mind Comments

A tantalizing trumpet that that's loaded with a loneliness that pulls and grips with passion. Well done my friend!

Dear Erica, The deep feelings of true love are clearly reflected here. Nice poem. Thanks and please reply

A Very nice expression of the state of mind. Behind these few liners a long and heavy amt. sorrows are hidden, what I can smell and realize. I only can keep my loving hands on your shoulder.

That loss, or gain, is the only way I can write. Otherwise I completely lack inspiration. Anyway beautiful poem that a lot of us relate. :)

These are natural feelings- that haunt you when you are without the person you love, lean on and look for inspiration. A well written poem.9/10.