Take care of what you ask of me
cuz i can't say no
and even though i'm aware
I can't stop at all
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What doesn't kill you makes you stronger, but not everything that strengthens you could kill you. The fact that you could write about this with such passion shows that your heart is a wonder. While this is somewhat irrelevant to the piece it's self It makes it more powerful in my mind
Coming through the hard times and looking back...is a sign of strength...you made it this far....you have the heart to carry forward my lovely....wonderful expressed lines...give this piece a real feel.....that's a poet
This is how exactly I feel atm. But I must say great job showing emotion.