Sunday, June 21, 2009

Losing My Mind Comments

Rating: 4.5

Take care of what you ask of me
cuz i can't say no
and even though i'm aware
I can't stop at all
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Amy Ormonde
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Bethany Williams 21 May 2015

This is how exactly I feel atm. But I must say great job showing emotion.

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rago rago 05 July 2009

well let your thoughts flow.......

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Kyle Jones 23 June 2009

What doesn't kill you makes you stronger, but not everything that strengthens you could kill you. The fact that you could write about this with such passion shows that your heart is a wonder. While this is somewhat irrelevant to the piece it's self It makes it more powerful in my mind

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~ Jon London ~ 23 June 2009

Coming through the hard times and looking back...is a sign of strength...you made it this far....you have the heart to carry forward my lovely....wonderful expressed lines...give this piece a real feel.....that's a poet

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Bethany Williams 21 June 2009

So sad. Its like u got dumped and ur showing your emotions.

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