Losing Inside Out... Comments
He wandered in vain in the richest woods
In search of a magic herb;
For the village apothecary too
Couldn’t offer him much help...
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A very good write dear Easwaran, Liked this poem also. Best wishes for a happy new year 2009. Write more and more.
A very good write, Kesav. Humorous treatment of a, sometimes, sore subject. Honestly though, I've experienced it both ways, with and without hair and I must confess, without is much less trouble. Best wishes, my friend. Richard
It's not a poem, rather a story with a moral.... thanks for sharing Kesavji...
Good strong write Kesav...enjoyed it...thanks for sharing it...
Wonderful pieceof writing, the theme leads you to the end in a suspense and thrills at the end, , , the lines and choice of words i liked, , , yes one should not loosethe inside out, , , , , , a 10
Oooooohhh...To buy Rogaine, or not to buy Rogaine...that is the question? No, i think not...For, the mind inside the head that houses the hair is far more of value than any aesthetics, that do nothing more for our sense of life-wisdom, than poor genes did for the folliclely challenged...! Graet Write & message here, my friend...Happy New Year! FjR
no matter what you try or do it will remain the same as written in fate.....a nice humorous write kesav, there are alot of messages in this marvellous write...one of the message which i understood after reading multiple times is that ' no matter what keep on trying, cause sometimes fate do change if only intentions is powerful '...i might be wrong, but i really enjoyed reading it, thanks for sharing 10+++ rgds baloch
A post Modern search for hair and many meanings, The Hakeem are also doing like that, and the poor man`s search so sad Ujade huye chaman vyse ki vyse, A good piece of KVE, thanks for sharing
nice write and aptly reflects what is what..dealing with life mess..........good imagery down there...
I share the view of LINDA FARR. you make always my day as i start living again by reading your poems. Very much reverberating.
Nice title! ..And you're right..I do like the humor especially the moral inside... With great loss he felt inside..he was carried away..going mad..and now..everything had gone..inside out! Great imagery..and very well narrated! Thanks for sharing! A 10+++!
Losing Inside Out...the obsession in our World for an outward appearance of pefection and beauty is backwards to what it should be. To much time spent on it takes away from what is truely important. It makes unhappy people, if the inside is strong, the outside can not take it away. Your poetry brings insight to living. Thank You, Linda
a story told with alot of twist and turns-the poor fellow he is had to get stuck everywhere-interesting poem-10
Amazing write indeed... I think it should be read by all Hair Transplant Surgeons, who are soo in fashion these days... Thanks once again Sir for making me read this wonderful write of yours...
sir, you are the best......and this poem says it all...........amusing and neat write
the title itself suggests that the poet is talking about more than the loss of hair. the poem is full of pathos, and as always the reader is invited to solve the riddle of life. but there are losses greater than hair- read vanity-. but like a river we have to move on and cut our losses. life is precious to hold on to what has already gone. Kesav, there is a hint of melancholy and stoic acceptance, in this very well composed poem.10 Mamta
Your title is provocative and the content of your poem does not disappoint. Excellent write, Kesav. Warm regards, Sandra
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8/15/2025 2:14:56 AM # 1.0.0
A tale spun around hair...very different, your imaginations and your expertise is bringing out the picture are marvelous!