Friday, September 23, 2011

Losing Inner Person Comments

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They don’t know what they are!
Bitter hearts and cold hearts
Bold person in them no more
Spirit in them not kind anymore
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Young Church Poetry
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Felix John 29 October 2011

The images used are great.one can feel the inner struggles to remain good and the bad actions we end up doing.keep it up.

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Dave Walker 24 September 2011

A good write. We all have demons to fight At some point in our lives. Beating those Demons can help us have a better life. Really good poem.

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Naida Nepascua Supnet 23 September 2011

Bad emotions should be changed and maybe then the real inner person will emerge

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