Wednesday, August 7, 2013

Losing In My Life Comments

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In one side I am gaining
On the other I am missing something
Like the sight of a flower nicely held
In between her petals a slice of joy
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Abdul Wahab
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Pratim Bishnu 10 August 2013

A very complex inner dilemma stated so simply, very nice work.

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Heather Wilkins 07 August 2013

sometimes we will love then other times we will gain. but the gain out weighs the losses. nice

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Nasarudheen Parameswaran 07 August 2013

With our losing no gaining; so the loss is inevitable and may be precious. Very nice.

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Babatunde Aremu 07 August 2013

Life is bi-polar. we either loose or gain. Nice write! Ps read my poems and critique

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 07 August 2013

In life generally there is fear that one is a born loser. This is nicely brought out in the poem. Beautiful poem.

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