Thursday, September 3, 2020

Losing Identity Looked Futile Comments

Rating: 4.8

I flee from the fire
which called me to embrace.
Claiming to be truth
And to take me to the ultimate truth
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M. Asim Nehal
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T Rajan Evol 06 September 2020

Life is precious till death knocks at the door. Interesting poem.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 September 2020

Fire claims to be truth within. And this is absolute truth too. Love embraces life time to time. To the memory of pure mind, whisper has whispered a lot. An amazing poem is very brilliantly penned. Thank you very much for sharing this work with us...10

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Edward Kofi Louis 06 September 2020

Illusions of love and life! ! ! Hustle and bustle! Still alive! ! ! ! ! ! ! Able to overcome. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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The whisperer kept whispering to me The pure mind does not need memory to remember Listen to the whisper..10

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Tom Allport 05 September 2020

An interesting write of ones life plight that forever searches for truth....well penned

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Anjandev Roy 04 September 2020

To drown self in the depth of the truth......profound piece.....thanks for sharing, dear friend.....anjandev roy.

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Anjandev Roy 04 September 2020

To drown self in the depth of the truth......profound piece.....thank u, dear poet.....anjandev roy.

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Michael Jack 03 September 2020

Some faiths are like this and we all are tested with death within the life.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 03 September 2020

Sir, You are one of the very few poets I endear Love your friendship and poetry my dear friend Sir I may be like a father +80 years Rgds

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Deluke Muwanigwa 03 September 2020

This is good. The way you describe lifes tribulations even that you contemplated suicide but saved yourself just by your own self will. And you are still alive. Great poem.

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Aarzoo Mehek 03 September 2020

The fight between the truth and false is so thin one has the tendency to drift away from reality. May God keep us safe from shaytans whispers. Very well written poem.10+++

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