Sunday, August 3, 2008

Losing Freedom Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sweet light fading, sinking the sun
When the stars come to play
You know day’s job is done
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Timothy Weiermann
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Paul Tousignant 14 August 2008

That was a very good poem with great meaning. Keep up the good work. Paul

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Anjali Sinha 06 August 2008

Nice poem---but why always a melancholy shade. You write beautifully. Keep sharing with us. +10 to you

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Timothy Weiermann

Timothy Weiermann

Tucson, Arizona
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