Losing Breath Poem by CHARMAINE SIMPSON

Losing Breath



Losing breath - trembling with fear - choking sensation - out of control,
Mind plays flashing pictures - no sense - feeling crazy - no control,
I need you - I need to talk - you are taken - cant be reached - cant speak,
Blocked - stopped - panicked - spinning- falling - drowning - sinking,
Suffocating - crying - lost - alone - what could I do? -I need you -
Why can't I speak to you? - Can't you hear me calling?
Can't you feel me in your heart? - Crying - crying for you - Why?
Why did she want to hurt me? - Why did she take you from me? -
Did you know? - Did you want this to happen? - Do you love her?
Do you love me? - WHY? ? ?

August 2005-" Losing Breath"

Wednesday, December 14, 2005
Topic(s) of this poem: loss,love,scared
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bill Smith 14 December 2005

liked this, unusual layout fair kicked along at a rate of knots

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I think all who read this cannot but react but with 'I've been there'..... this describes it. Thank you.

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CHARMAINE SIMPSON

CHARMAINE SIMPSON

Adelaide - Australia
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