Wednesday, March 14, 2007

Losing A Friend Comments

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When you left me, it broke apart,
How I long to feel you, see you, hear you.
Now I must take this broken, bloody heart,
and fix the damage, just to feel you.
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Thomas Dominguez
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Thomas Dominguez 15 March 2007

Thank you, he was very dear to me. And I do truly miss him. But I appreciate all the praises that I can get. You don't know how much I wish to thanks you.

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Kimberly Kastner 14 March 2007

You describe the feeling of loss very well. I lost a friend, too, months ago, and I can relate to your poem. Great job.

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Thomas Dominguez

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