Loser I Comments

It's a diamond-in-the-rough, salveagable. And as much as I like comments, I feel yours was half-hearted and it missed the point of my piece. I have made some changes on it and I would like for you to see if your perspective changes also, thanks aung si.

Speaking truthfully, you acquire talent Keep it up!

Last, do I (aung si) lose in love game? Probably, I'm afraid, Last, do I (aung si) lose in Poetry, all the same? No, because I make the grade!

Here (some how) i go with ya. i just know the love sometimes will bring hate. but the word hate is incorrect. we should say: it brings sober! we will feel how our love is. Perfect one.

'But i don't show hatred and blame' caught me i really love your work

Despite you make me shame, I'll be no longer insane.................did your love really make you shame? ? If so..I wish you'll be really no longer insane!