Sunday, October 11, 2009

Loser Comments

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I sit here, invisible to everyone,
Nothing I say or do matters,
Not even my friends know me,
Just more people decieved by my mask.
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Ocean Myranda
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Ocean Myranda 07 September 2011

I agree, and thank you, I'm glad you like it. (p.s. it's Myranda, not Miranda, and call me Ocean)

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Joan.L. Denton 15 October 2009

Dear Miranda - this is a good poem. There are so many things in life that often beset us but if we sit and dwell on them we become losers - watcing others win!

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