Saturday, December 19, 2009

Lose To Win Comments

Rating: 3.2

Sometimes you have to lose to win
You lose a love but gain a friend
Oh, how lucky I have been
For love can be lost, but friendships
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David KUSH
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Kim Barney 14 February 2015

Very nice. I would echo what Adeline foster said. It doesn't usually happen that way, but would be nice if it did.

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Rajnish Manga 29 November 2014

An optimistic man will never lose hope. Even in the most trying moments, he will dig out a burning flame he thought has blown out long ago. These lines are worth quoting: So when in life when you least expect it / A friendship thought lost is resurrected.

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Ramesh Rai 02 September 2014

Amaging n great write

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Adeline Foster 13 May 2014

Would that it happened that way. All too often not, but yes should it, how nice it would be. Read mine - The Protagonist - Adeline

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yellowbell alamanda 07 May 2010

this is an amazing piece, just speak the matter of fact acceptance from the pain of lose and gaining from what is lose. Wonderful, short poem!

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loNeLY AnGel 15 April 2010

your poetry is amazing....

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