Monday, August 13, 2007

Los Dos Diablos Comments

Rating: 5.0

Lights flashing,
Swords clashing.
Blood pouring on the ground.
We fight for what’s left of the town.
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David N. Degnan
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Aurora Wells 25 August 2007

This is proof of when souls connect.. you both have the same vision and anything you add to another's words, just connects as one. Great work guys... looking for a sequel!

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Cecelia Warner 23 August 2007

David n Adam, This poem was really good! ! ! ! When u 2 write together.....it's almost like me n my best friend(My sista Laura) writin our stories together. Except our stories r crazy n sometimes in order 2 get our story.....u have 2 think like us or u'll just be totally lost.LOL. Well, keep up da writin. <3 Shannah

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Lee Degnan 14 August 2007

This sound like it needs a sequel, blood brothers. Beautiful collaboration... especially if you consider that a few short years ago, you wanted to throw rocks at each others' heads. Ah, kindergarteners, can't live with'em, can't sell'em... Love my boys, may you live forever as the best of friends. From, the proud momma.

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David N. Degnan

David N. Degnan

Peekskill, NY
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