Saturday, September 9, 2017

Lorries Are Repaired Comments

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After every transportation of goods,
Lorries get dusty appearance in road,
We need to wash and do greasing,
After many days these need repair.
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 February 2019

each machine needs repair.. usual phenomenaa...10

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Susan Williams 10 September 2017

I am glad you look about life and find so many different topics that you can write about! ! ! Lorries... has anyone else written about lorries? Yet they are features in most every country's life and economy as well as those whose job is to drive them. Well-chosen topic- -I think you have inspired me to look around and find a topic that hasn't had scads of poems written about it.

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Laurie Van Der Hart 10 September 2017

You chose an interesting topic, Kumarmani, and gave dignity to sow thing we seldom consider. I've just restarted from a long road trip to Germany, passing many trucks. They sustain our lives by the goods they carry. And not an easy job or lifestyle for truck drivers and their families, if they have any, who don't see them much. Thanks for your thought-provoking poem.

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Akhtar Jawad 10 September 2017

A well observed and nicely penned poem...............................................

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Muzahidul Reza 10 September 2017

Lorries Are Repaired so that these can carry well again, great thoughts, thank you for sharing the poem with us

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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