Lorena Comments

I have still the same vision: The poem subtly questions the nature of power and the choices we make in response. Sublimest response!

Rereading this energetic poem gives me more power and strenght to continue my path in life. Myriad Stars at the fullest! Love it more!

Revisiting this poem, gives me more spirit!

The theme is about authority and its impact. The poem describes a moment when the poetess holds something soft and trembling in her palm, akin to a new bird. A very fascinating poem. TFS

The imagery of the new bird trembling in your palm, and the contemplation of authority and obedience, struck a chord within me. Your ability to convey such complex emotions and thoughts in such a straightforward manner is truly admirable.

THREE: The act of opening the window and extending an uncupped hand suggests a desire for freedom or release from this authority. The poem subtly questions the nature of power and the choices we make in response

TWO: This object symbolizes authority, which always insists on itself, measures individuals, and promises sweetness if obeyed—much like saints or angels..

ONE: In this poem the theme is about authority and its impact. The poem describes a moment when the poetess holds something soft and trembling in her palm, akin to a new bird.

I've got one of these and have to admit that Clifton has captured its essence, with great economy of language. It's selfish and tends to make false promises. This eloquent and elegant poem cuts it effectively down to size.

There's something horrible about this.

Birdie as symbol and hope in deep ocean...a novice or the departed body uncupped hand something

Find this piece to be deep and a little perplexing.

Way deep. chilling... odd