Lord Of Grief Comments

This character reminds me of that rare god in world mythology who creates himself (Egyptian pantheon has one such) . Your poem details the sheer difficulty of such self-birth, but as Lord of Grief this one is acquainted with creative pain. I like the process which will reach critical mass and create being, namely, THAT INVETERATE DESIRE THAT GIVES ME WHAT I WANT. The series of words - want, desire, hunger, insatiable, etc. - all relating to the movement of desire, show DESIRE is the trigger of creativity/creation.