Friday, July 14, 2006

Lord O' Steel Comments

Rating: 5.0

Still is the dawn this day,
the wind is quiet.

Words fail and tumble sadly
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Kristin Nicole RothDavis
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Ernestine Northover 15 July 2006

A dream of a poem. Magnificent write. Congratulations. Perfection. Love Ernestine XXX

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***** ********* 14 July 2006

I must agree with frank and patricia Kristin, this is a beautifully merge piece of contemporary and yet classically formed poetry to be very proud of. Well done, I love the title and the power and faith within the poem is awesome. Smiling at you, wishing you well, Tai

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POETESS K....THIS IS YOUR DAY, MY FRIEND...THE DAY YOU TOOK MAGNIFICENCE TO A HIGHER LEVEL OF LITERARY ENDOWMENT... THIS POEM IS TRULY YOUR FINEST WORK YET, IS MOST ACCOMPLISHED, AND IN MY OPINION SHOULD BE RECOGNIZED AS A CLASSIC ENTRY OF POETIC ARTISTRY...FLAWLESS IN STRUCTURE, IMAGERY, RHYTHM AND DICTION VALYE, YOU MY TALENTED FRIEND EXHUDE WITH PEN OF GOLD....KUDOS TO YOU MISS KRIS THE FRANKSTER'''''''''''''''''''''''''''

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Patricia Gale 14 July 2006

Fantastic write. A touch of old, a classic none the less!

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Kristin Nicole RothDavis

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