Sunday, November 15, 2015

Lord Help Us! Comments

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It is so hard to get our minds around
The sadness in the world it seems
We go through our daily lives
Facing toward our hopes, our dreams.
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Marilyn Lott
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Shakil Ahmed 15 November 2015

nice poem, world community must find out a way to fight against terrorism, innocent people are being targetted, this is really shameful, well, you have painted your passions well with beautiful images, thanks for sharing, Great Poet, if you find time please read some of my poems and leave your comments.,

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Rajnish Manga 15 November 2015

Lord help us! This is an objective portrayal of what's happening in the world today. Innocent people are being killed today. What for? Elected governments are being subverted and peace loving people are being killed. Situation calls for solid remedy. Very well articulated poem. Thanks. Many of us feel pretty safe for the most part There are terrorists who kill folks’ for no reason The victims are people just like we are Hatred and evil can wipe away our trust

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