All of my days, I was searching for you.
They told me that I was made from you.
And that you created every thing around.
Sun, moon, Sea and me.
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Ordinary people usually need to meditate, sacrifice and struggle a lot to please God. It takes time. That's the most important lesson of your poem.
God don't got pleased with our pain. Simply God loves me & you. But still he is fair to let us learn from pain :) trust me :) God is Love :)