Monday, November 17, 2008

**** Lord Bless Grandpa Comments

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there he lies in his room, so broken
lyk a piece of fray lies helpless to preserve its fading existence
I jus luk at the way his body trembles wid every breath inside
tired and exhausted by the recurring pain
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Surya . 15 May 2009

lucky grandppa to have loving grandy.touching poem.posted 10 surya

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Kesav Easwaran 22 November 2008

i recall the feelings my daughter had at the time her grand pa fell seriously ill...well, your write took me to some painful past not that distant...a touching write, Pooja...i join your prayers...thanks for sharing...10

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 17 November 2008

Dost......do not worry.....our prayers are always there with you.........and a wonderful composition.....though i cant say i enjoyed it....coz its painful.... so no thank you either......'lordbless'....

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Min Sia 17 November 2008

Yes dear I will..and with this poem so passionate! Godbless! This poem is really great!

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