there he lies in his room, so broken
lyk a piece of fray lies helpless to preserve its fading existence
I jus luk at the way his body trembles wid every breath inside
tired and exhausted by the recurring pain
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i recall the feelings my daughter had at the time her grand pa fell seriously ill...well, your write took me to some painful past not that distant...a touching write, Pooja...i join your prayers...thanks for sharing...10
Dost......do not worry.....our prayers are always there with you.........and a wonderful composition.....though i cant say i enjoyed it....coz its painful.... so no thank you either......'lordbless'....
Yes dear I will..and with this poem so passionate! Godbless! This poem is really great!
lucky grandppa to have loving grandy.touching poem.posted 10 surya