Thursday, December 14, 2017

Lora In The Garden Of Eden [ Inspired By Lora Colon's "Red Ink", On P H; Love/Lust/Loneliness; Very Short; Creation; Ok!S E X! ! ] Comments

Rating: 5.0

If Eden's Adam's BIG fig leaf you had upturned,
I think, your advances, he'd not have spurned.

Perhaps horny Adam needn't have lost any rib,
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Bri Edwards
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Loke Kok Yee 12 January 2018

How could you know that she does it well? From reading her poems, will it tell? Or had she put you under her spell? Causing your head and elsewhere to swell Thanks Bri

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Fiadh Fida 18 December 2017

he'd not have spurned, well humorous, liked,

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Akhtar Jawad 15 December 2017

So you mean heart of a woman is a barred cot, but Bri is a child with long legs. Enjoyed your poem.

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