Loosing Your World Comments
Why do I bother putting make-up on
this beautifly broken face?
My shattered soul has taken its toll,
on this put-back-together place.
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Im in love with this rhyme scheme i think its very clever..Im also liking the poems mood..the rhyme scheme really helps the feeling along. Great writing
I love the rhyme scheme you attempt to use here, it's really interesting. the rhythm is a little patchy, but maybe something to work on if you ever re-write it? Overall, a really nice piece.
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7/28/2025 5:29:18 AM # 1.0.0
Cracked limbs and broken wings nice sad lyric poem...touching