Saturday, July 23, 2016

Loose Threads Comments

Rating: 5.0

Your thin white skin spreads
on the front. The blue
veins have become the strings,
annexing my peninsula.
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Satish Verma
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Ratnakar Mandlik 23 July 2016

State of mind wonderfully unfolded through this verse rich with rhythm and rhyme. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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