Loose Connection Comments

This is a fine explanation of the process, the preparation and the interuption. I like the line 'dinner is served' but wanted it to read afterward...'no one starved'....that's how I said it when I read it. I think you are saying in this poem...I can't do my thing with this boil around me, with the tedium of nurturing. I can relate to this though not a mother. Concentration is required to accomplish work of anykind and especially of creative endeavors.