Wednesday, December 21, 2016

Loops Comments

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The thread of this day has unwound
Un-spooled loops lay at my feet,
And looking at the tangled lengths
I am left to contemplate that this
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Seamus O' Brian
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Annette Aitken 21 December 2016

I can feel the layers peel off as at the end of the day when time to relax, until its time to gather ourself together again and do it all over again, and life goes on. Annette

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Anil Kumar Panda 21 December 2016

This is really beautiful. Time gone does not return. Clever use of metaphors while spilling your feelings. Loved it.

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Seamus O' Brian

Seamus O' Brian

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