Thursday, August 6, 2009

Looking Up Comments

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If a picture is worth a thousand words
Then picture me flying high in the sky with a thousand birds
What would you say?
Better yet what would you do?
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Brian Jefferson
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C. P. Sharma 20 August 2009

Beautiful poetry of the binding body and the liberating soul. CP

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Brian Jefferson 06 August 2009

Thanks a lot for the comment. I tried a different approach in my opinion on this one. I was trying to convey that everyone needs help in order to achieve success because you are going to face hardships and criticism. Also that no one starts at the top they work their way up.

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HaZeM PaKKaR 06 August 2009

Wow.. It's really charming & fascinating.. You've truly expressed your talent, Using very well chosen words.. Please, let me know about your new piece!

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