Tuesday, January 30, 2007

Looking Through Your Eyes Comments

Rating: 5.0

Found you in bed, with salt stained checks
Knew there were things you hadn’t told me
Focused my energy, prayed to see
The things you’ve been hiding so deeply
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Lynn Grassette
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Original Unknown Girl 01 February 2007

Like this one too, you and I seem to have been treading similar paths my girl! Always the guy who sees it too late.... why is that? ? ? Goddammit! HG: -) xx

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Not a member No 4 31 January 2007

This sounds like very traumatic content. The poetry is very good. Tight and rhythmic with clever use of language and transmits the atmosphere very effectively.

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