Found you in bed, with salt stained checks
Knew there were things you hadn’t told me
Focused my energy, prayed to see
The things you’ve been hiding so deeply
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This sounds like very traumatic content. The poetry is very good. Tight and rhythmic with clever use of language and transmits the atmosphere very effectively.
Like this one too, you and I seem to have been treading similar paths my girl! Always the guy who sees it too late.... why is that? ? ? Goddammit! HG: -) xx